Emma pt. 7
Want to start at the beginning? - Emma, Part 1
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The Laudriel estate and the Velshin field it boardered rested on the upper slope of the dwin valley. From the front door of the estate, a huge archway carved out of the rock face, Emma could see the valley spread before her. The sky was clear and bright, the sun just rising over the eastern edge of the valley.
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The Laudriel estate and the Velshin field it boardered rested on the upper slope of the dwin valley. From the front door of the estate, a huge archway carved out of the rock face, Emma could see the valley spread before her. The sky was clear and bright, the sun just rising over the eastern edge of the valley.
The upper slopes of the valley were mostly fields and
farmland, varying shades of green in a patchwork pattern. Other estates were
scattered throughout, but none were built fully into the mountainside like the
Laudreil estate. They spilled out of the stone, gray against the green fields
that surrounded them.
Further down the valley, following
the twisting roads that led down the slope, grey stone buildings dotted the
land. The closer to the center of the valley the denser the buildings grew until
the city itself appeared at the spot where the many roads converged. Dwin
houses and public buildings did not rise higher than two stories so it looked
more like a quarry of grey stone carved out of the center of the valley than a
collection of buildings.
The Ardent stood in the very
center of the city. Even at such a distance it looked massive, rising out of
the ground, taking up a space large enough to accommodate a dozen of the
surrounding buildings.
He looked east over the valley,
his back pointed toward the distant coast, his head bent down, studying the
tools in his hands. Emma saw the statue from the side, his immense right arm
and shoulder hunched over his work.
She leaned against the carved
stone archway. It was a detailed relief of the dwin and dwarves working
together to build the city. Paldurain was one of dozens of cities dwarves
had helped erect. The dwarves had no permanent homes of their own, but moved
around through the land at the will of the Unyielding God, sculpting the world as
he saw fit. Some dwarves lived in Paldurain, side by side with their sibling race,
but the vast majority of them were nomads, making temporary homes in the
enclaves they built into mountains throughout the world.
A form appeared on the long path leading to Emma’s house,
emerging from a bend in the road. She suspected at once that it was Rilen, and
it only took a moment of inspection to know she was right.
She bolted forward and instantly regretted her attire. She’d
wanted to look professional, responsible, so had chosen a yellow silk dress
that went down past her knees. The matching shoes hit the ground and she could
feel the fabric pull and stretch against the gravel; too much running and she
would wear holes through them. The dress wasn’t too constraining, but its
flowing sleeves whipped behind her annoyingly.
“Emma,” Rilen called and waved, “are you ready?”
“Yes,” Emma said as she approached, “I am.” She stopped and
scooped Rilen’s hand in her own, “I’m going to do it, I’m going to sponsor
Deem.”
Rilen squeezed her hand and bounced in delight, “Oh Emma,
that is so wonderful.” Her face broke into a wide smile and Emma smiled with
her, laughing and wrapping her friend in a hug.
Rilen finally pushed away and struggled to put her
expression into something more composed. Emma pulled back, but kept her wide
grin.
“We do still have to win the contract,” Rilen said, “but
with the workers Deem’s organized, and with your support, we should have the
best proposal.”
“We should get there, I need to get some more details from
Deem so I’m ready to present my patronage to the Assembly.”
They walked down the path at a much slower pace than Emma
would have liked, Rilen had not thought to bring the rabbit skin boots. The
packed gravel crunched under their feet and a warm breeze blew.
Emma asked Rilen questions about Deem’s business as they
made their way along the winding roads. She already knew most of what she would need to make her
presentation. The Merchant’s Assembly was a formal place, but not an
ostentatious one. Contract negotiations were straight forward, with the
petitioners plainly reporting what resources and labor they could bring to a
contract and what compensation they were expecting in return. Though many
complex political and personal factors played into every contract, those
matters were handled in private, not on the floor of the Assembly.
The only things Emma still needed to know were the specifics
of how many workers, dwin and human, would be employed, and the delivery
schedules.
The sun slowly moved through the sky and the countryside vanished around them, replaced
by granaries, kewel stables, and other public buildings. Before them The Ardent
towered up toward the sky. As they approached the base of the valley the
enormity of the statue grew more apparent. It blocked out the sky above it and
hid the far slope of the valley.
Even after visiting the city more times than she could
count, Emma still couldn’t help but crank her neck up to see the huge form.
His back was bent, his focus toward the ground where each of
his hands held carving tools. He worked at the rock from which his own leg
emerged, seeming to chip away the stone to free himself from the ground. There
was no platform or base, he appeared to carve himself out of raw stone of the
valley floor. Emma knew this was an illusion. The stone had been harvested
outside the valley and worked to look like one solid mass at the valley’s
center.
As they walked past ever denser clusters of buildings, still only
the very bottom of The Ardent was obscured. The city streets were cobbled stone and Emma quickened her
pace, feeling the smooth stone through the silk. Rilen hurried after as they
darted past grey stone buildings and dwin walking through the streets.
Most people were dressed in the bright, fiery colors that
were popular among dwin, which matched their shining red and yellow eyes.
The girls took the last turn in the winding streets and
emerged onto the open courtyard around The Ardent. This close, the details of
his form were finally clear. What seemed like smooth skin and cloth from afar
was revealed to be an uneven surface, shaped into many small forms.
Before them was The Unyielding God’s right arm, but the
flesh of his arm was raised, rippling and folding. Emma had stood at the base
of the statue before, staring into the stone until the true shape of it was
clear. They were faces, hands, arms, people. They were dwarves. Every part of
him was made of hundreds of dwarves, each one a small part of his nature, an
expression of his will and his purpose.
“There they are.” Rilen said, taking Emma’s arm and leading
her across the courtyard.
Benches and topiaries were
scattered throughout the courtyard. Deem and his people gathered around one
bench, near the entrance to the Merchant’s Assembly. Deem stood next to the
bench, his hands on his hips as he spoke to the rest, Rilen called his name and
he turned and waved them over.
Parien was sprawled on the bench
behind Deem, one leg resting on it, her arm slung over the carved back.
Lison was behind the bench,
leaning on it, his head tilted up to stare at the massive back of The Ardent.
When he heard Rilen he turned as well, waving and smiling at Emma. In the
sunlight she could see just how pale his skin was, a milky white that
contrasted his dark hair. Most of the humans Emma had seen in Paluderian had
tan skin, so to her he looked foreign, exotic.
He leaned forward as
they approached and she saw another man who had been obscured by Lison. He sat
on the back of the bench, facing away from the monument, his legs resting
behind Parien’s head. His elbows were on his knees and he was watching the
Assembly Hall. Emma was sure it was the man she’d seen at the campfire. His
narrow, bony face looked the same, and messy orange locks surrounded his
head in a tangle.
“Emma dear, it’s so good to see
you.” Parien said as she remained seated.
“My little Lady, you look very
lovely today.” Lison inclined his head and Emma though for the first time that
her dress was rather nice, “You didn’t come to visit us at the campsite, Juniper
and I missed you.”
“I had some work to do, and a
decision to make.”
“So, you’ve made up your mind?”
Deem asked.
“Yes,” she cast her eyes quickly
from face to face, finally resting on Deem, “I’ll be your Patron.”
Deem exhaled a quick sigh and
nodded, and Parien smiled broadly. Lison rush forward and put his hands around
Emma’s waist, lifting her in a hug and spinning her once in a circle, the long
sleeves of her dress trailing behind. She let out a high pitched laugh and
wrapped her arms around him, hugging him back. He placed her back on the ground
and Rilen took her hand, hugging her as well.
“This is wonderful Emma, thank
you.” Parien said, sitting up straight, but still not standing.
“I knew our little Lady wouldn’t
be able to resist,” Lison said, patting Deem on the shoulder. In the daylight
Emma could see Lison’s eyes were a dark brown, almost black.
The redhead turned away from the
Assembly Hall, and stared at Emma with blue eyes, his mouth a straight,
emotionless line.
“Very good Emma. Thank you,” Deem
darted his eyes down as he spoke, then back to her face, taking a deep breath,
“You’ll need to be ready to present when the Assembly convenes.”
Emma explained what information
she already had, and what she still needed to know. He told her about the
workers, the size of the crew and how often they could make deliveries. She
recited her whole presentation to him, with the new data included, more for his
piece of mind than her own. Emma had a quick mind for facts and figures,
needing little repetition to commit something to memory.
“That is excellent Emma. If you present it like that, Hillsman
would be a fool to refuse.” Deem clasped her around the forearm and squeezed.
After that they waited around the bench for a time. Rilen
talked to her brother about the dwin he’d hired, and the humans talked and
occasionally whispered together, drawing a few stares from passing dwin. Though
humans were not completely uncommon in Paludrian, they were not often seen
lounging around in The Ardent’s courtyard.
Lison gestured Emma over to lean with him against the bench.
She did so and glanced up at The Ardent, aware of Lison’s arm brushing against
her own.
“You’ll love Blue Coast, there’s no other city in the world
like it. And the ride there is amazing, we’ll skirt the outer edge of Red Iron
Forest.”
“It all sounds fanastic, I can’t
wait.” Her head swam with pictures from her books and the landscapes she’d
constructed in her mind.
“Still,” Lison gestured up to the
statue, “You won’t see anything like this in Blue Coast. This is something unto
itself.” He brought his hand down and sheltered his eyes from the sun, which
was now shining along the statue’s edge, “You start to understand why people
worship the dwarves when you can see what they did.”
“What?” Deem looked up in
confusion, “That?” He squinted at the statue and waved a dismissive hand at it,
“Dwarves didn’t make that. Dwarves would never build something like that.
That’s dwin work, built after the Divide.”
Lison looked at him in surprise,
“Dwin? But isn’t that the dwarven god? The Unyielding God?”
“Dwarves didn’t build statues to
him,” Emma said, “they didn’t even really have a name for him, it was non-dwarves who named him The Ardent,” she shrugged,
“He wasn’t like the other gods who sat apart from their people, he was his
people.” She looked at the face of a dwarf emerging out of The Ardent’s back, a
clenched fist beside him.
“And they were him,” Deem added,
“He was the purpose, their sure devotion, and they were the body, his hands and
tools. And when the Divide swept away the gods the dwarves went with them.”
“I thought the dwarves died
fighting in the wars of the Divide, that they were all defeated.” Lison turned
to the side, facing Emma and Deem.
“Many did, but some survived,”
Emma explained, “They sought refuge, they came here, to our valley. But even
though their bodies survived, it wasn’t enough. Their god was gone, they
were hollow.” Seeing earnest interest on Lison’s face, she continued,
“Different dwin recorded different things. Some say the dwarves stayed strong
to the end, noble in body and spirit, only finally vanishing because they no longer
bore children. But there are other accounts, mostly rejected by dwin
historians, that say as time passed the dwarves wasted away, finally becoming
marrowdead, empty of all life, only the vestige of a body remaining.”
The redhead looked up at that, the
line of his mouth bent slightly, his eyebrows pulled down.
“How can a nation of people all be
one god?” Parien asked, “Did they all share one mind? Where they just drones?”
“It’s like Tunki’s Daughter,” the
redhead said, his voice higher pitched than Emma would have expected, “She is simply a river, but at the same time, from her headwaters in the Clavehounds to her alluvial fans out
into the ocean,” he waved his hand toward the west, “she was once a single
being, daughter of the goddess Tunki. But she still had streams and goosenecks
and branches. The water flowed through each small part of its own accord, but ultimately
it was all part of the whole, part of the one goddess.”
“Alluvial fans?” Parien said,
confusion on her face.
“It’s...” he sighed in
frustration, “it’s the sand and dirt a river deposits at its endpoint, it
spreads out like a fan.” He opened his hands, spreading his fingers to
mimic a fan.
“Ah,” Parien nodded.
“Well Sil,” Lison clasped him on
the back, “I think I understand what you’re saying about that river even less
than what Emma said about the dwarves. But religions never did make sense to
me,” he laughed, “it’s a good thing I was born after the Divide.”
Sil nodded, his mouth pulled into
what might have been a grin, or a grimace.
“They’re opening the door,” Rilen
said.
They turned to watch as the round
stone doors of the Assembly swung open, a shaft of sunlight cutting into the
shadowed room beyond.
“You go first Emma, take a set
with the nobles. Parien and I will be in soon.”
“Just you two,” Emma looked at Lison,
then Rilen.
“We are the proprietors, we are
the only ones who should be there. Besides, I’m sure I’ll get enough
grief for bringing one human into the hall,” he turned to Lison and Sil, “You
boys, be ready when we come out, if we get the contract I want those carts
prepared before sundown.”
“We’ll be here waiting,” Lison
said.
Sil nodded curtly.
“Good.” Deem said.
“I’ll wait here Emma, I’ll see you
when you get out.” Rilen gripped her friend by the forearms and pulled her
close, touching their cheeks together.
A nervous knot twisted in Emma’s
stomach as she pulled away from Rilen. The dark interior of the Assembly Hall
looked cold and constricting. Claustrophobia swam in her mind as she thought
about entering and speaking to a gathering of noble dwin.
She closed her eyes, then opened
them again, glancing up to see Lison’s dark, glinting eyes. He winked at her
and put his hand on her shoulder.
Don't know if it was just my mood or not, but I got a little lost in the beginning with the transitioning.
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, a very good entry into the story.
I like the relationship you are continuing to build. It feels very natural.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the comments about the statue, interspersed the way they are also felt very natural, details emerging as they were seen for the first time (by us).
The only issue I had was the distance at the beginning. You made it feel rather expansive initially, looking across the fields and all but that was lost as they traveled.